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you have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around the city. write a letter of application to the tourism office

you have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around the city. write a letter of application to the tourism office YL2XN
Dear Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the local tour guide job. I got so excited when a former co-worker showed me the advertisement. I have worked in a travel agency for 2 years and have good experience. Besides that, I am eager to learn and I am super passionate for this job. I have also worked as a hotel tour guide for a short period of time. I will be graduating in world history from NYCU in august therefor I think I’m a good fit for this job and I believe it is a fantastic opportunity for me to show my knowledge on history, historical places and tourist attractions. I would love to hear from you. You can reach me by this address. Sincerely, Sarah Johnson
Dear Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the local tour guide job. I
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excited when a former co-worker
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me the advertisement.

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I
have worked in a travel agency for 2 years and have
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good
experience.
Besides
that, I am eager to
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learn and
I am super passionate for this job. I have
also
worked as a hotel tour guide for a short period of time. I will be graduating in world history from
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NYCU
in
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august
therefor I
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think
I’m a
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good
fit for this job and I believe it is a fantastic opportunity for me to
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show
my knowledge on history, historical places and tourist attractions.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would
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love
to hear from you. You can reach me by this address.

Sincerely
,

Sarah Johnson
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IELTS letter you have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around the city. write a letter of application to the tourism office

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  American English
6 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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