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a friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer, he has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your firend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. at least 150 words

a friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer, he has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your firend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. at least 150 words OVgG3
Dear William,         I am writing to you to describe the best days of my life.    These past couple of years, I have been going on a camping getaway. On the one hand, I believe camping to be a perfect disconnection from everyday working stressful office life behind a desk. Furthermore, it is a magical way to connect with nature and listen to the harmony between the river and the widllife. In addition to that, it would be a perfect escape for physical activity; you will find yourself full of positive vibes. On the other hand, I remember you were disturbed by insects; this might be a bit complicated. Furthermore, you willl have to prepare your food; the closest restaurant is 40 min away. Finally, I would love to join you for camping. The weather seems to be amazing in August at Nava Valley and River. Sincerely, Karen
Dear William,
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I am writing to you to
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describe
the best days of my life.
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These past couple of years, I have been going on a camping getaway. On the one hand, I believe camping to be a perfect disconnection from everyday working stressful office life behind a desk.
Furthermore
, it is a magical way to connect with nature and listen to the harmony between the river and the
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widllife
.
In addition
to that, it would be a perfect escape for physical activity; you will find yourself full of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
vibes.

On the other hand
, I remember you
were disturbed
by insects; this might be a bit complicated.
Furthermore
, you
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willl
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have to
prepare your food; the closest restaurant is 40 min away.

Finally
, I would
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love
to
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join
you for camping. The weather seems to be amazing in August at
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Nava
Valley and River.

Sincerely
,

Karen

IELTS letter a friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer, he has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your firend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. at least 150 words

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  American English
5 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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