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a friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer, he has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your firend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. at least 150 words

a friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer, he has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your firend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. at least 150 words OVgG3

Dear William, I am writing to you to describe the best days of my life. These past couple of years, I have been going on a camping getaway. On the one hand, I believe camping to be a perfect disconnection from everyday working stressful office life behind a desk. Furthermore, it is a magical way to connect with nature and listen to the harmony between the river and the widllife. In addition to that, it would be a perfect escape for physical activity; you will find yourself full of positive vibes. On the other hand, I remember you were disturbed by insects; this might be a bit complicated. Furthermore, you willl have to prepare your food; the closest restaurant is 40 min away. Finally, I would love to join you for camping. The weather seems to be amazing in August at Nava Valley and River. Sincerely, Karen

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Sincerely
,

Karen