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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start xmgrw

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my inability to start my job in your organization. I applied for this job and got selected. I received my joining letter three days ago and it is mentioned there I should join the organization within 15 days after receiving the joining letter. Unfortunately, due to unavoidable circumstances, I am unable to do so. My grandfather suffered a cardiac arrest. He has been hospitalized and I am going to take care of him. As I am the only grandson, it is my responsibility to assist him in this difficult time. I will be back only after he recovered properly from this illness. I am expecting to join the organization by the end of next month as the doctor told that it will take 14 days to get fully recovered. I would be grateful to you if you allow me to join after the due date considering my situation. thanking you for your kind attentionYours faithfully, kiran.

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my inability to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 my job in your organization. I applied for this job and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 selected. I received my joining letter three days ago and it is mentioned
 there I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the organization within 15 days after receiving the joining letter. Unfortunately, due to unavoidable circumstances, I am unable to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
. My grandfather suffered a cardiac arrest. He has been Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).hospitalized, and
hospitalized and
 I am going to take care of him. As I am the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 grandson, it is my responsibility to assist him in this difficult time. I will be back This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 after he recovered properly
 from this illness. I am expecting to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the organization by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of next
 month as the doctor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 that it will take 14 days to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
fully
 recovered. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be grateful to you if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 after the due date considering my situation. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThanking
thanking
 you for your kind Possible spelling mistake found.
attentionYours
faithfully
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kiran
. 