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Write a letter to a tour agency and say Where did you see this advertisement? Explain why are you suitable for this job. Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest for the position of an English speaking tour guide in your company 'Tour Travels' in reference to the advertisement in the Tribune on 15/03/2020. I have completed the post graduation in History from Delhi university, Delhi, and have an excellent speaking and writing skills in English which are must for your job to communicate with the foreign tourists. Furthermore, I have an experience as a tour guide in Star travel which is in Rajasthan and additionally, I also possess in depth knowledge of all the tourists places here. However, the condition of most of the tourist places in our region is pity and this need to be improved. I think government should impose entry fees in order to collect the revenue, which in turn, can be used to further preserve the infrastructure of these historic buildings. Thus improvement in the architect and premises of ancient forts and museums will attract numerous tourists to these places. I hope that I fulfill all the necessary credentials to be a tour guide in your organisation. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours' faithfully, Raghu
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my interest for the position of an
English speaking
tour guide in your
company
'Tour Travels' in reference to the advertisement in the Tribune on 15/03/2020.

I have completed the post graduation in History from Delhi university, Delhi, and have an excellent speaking and writing
skills
in English which are
must
for your job to communicate with the foreign
tourists
.
Furthermore
, I have an experience as a tour guide in Star travel which is in Rajasthan and
additionally
, I
also
possess in depth knowledge of all the
tourists
places here.

However
, the condition of most of the
tourist
places in our region is pity and this need to be
improved
. I
think
government
should impose entry fees in order to collect the revenue, which in turn, can be
used
to
further
preserve the infrastructure of these historic buildings.
Thus
improvement in the architect and premises of ancient forts and museums will attract numerous
tourists
to these places.

I hope that I fulfill all the necessary credentials to be a tour guide in your
organisation
. Hope to hear from you
soon
.

Yours'
faithfully
,

Raghu
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a tour agency and say Where did you see this advertisement? Explain why are you suitable for this job. Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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