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You wish to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to the university. In your letter you should ask about: the accommodation and fees possible scholarships and the qualifications required for acceptance.

You wish to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to the university. In your letter you should ask about: the accommodation and fees possible scholarships and the qualifications required for acceptance. GM3oo
Dear Sir/Madam, I hope this letter finds you in good spirit and health. I am writing to you regarding your university's accommodation and fee per course. As Harvard University has one of the ivey league universities, I am seeking to know the charge for one single room in male dorms and the average semester cost. In addition, I would also like to request you to inform about current scholarship offers in the business faculty so that I can take preparation beforehand. Having said that, I have received grade 'A's throughout my high school and my parents are not capable to apply for a bank loan because of low income. I, therefore, will look forward to applying for both need-based and merit-based opportunities. Finally, can you guide me to find data on academic qualification? I have looked over on your website, but I did not find any pertinent information regarding class profiles. It would also be great, if you let me know last year's acceptance rate. I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Zarif Enam
Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope this letter finds you in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
spirit and health.

I am writing to you regarding your university's accommodation and fee per course. As Harvard University has one of the
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ivey
league universities, I am seeking to know the charge for one single room in male dorms and the average semester cost.

In addition
, I would
also
like to request you to inform about
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
scholarship offers in the business faculty
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can take preparation beforehand. Having said that, I have received grade 'A's throughout my high school and my parents are not capable to apply for a bank loan
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of low income. I,
therefore
, will look forward to applying for both need-based and merit-based opportunities.

Finally
, can you guide me to find data on academic qualification? I have looked over on your website,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I did not find any pertinent information regarding
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
profiles. It would
also
be great, if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know last year's acceptance rate.

I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Zarif
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Enam
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IELTS letter You wish to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to the university. In your letter you should ask about: the accommodation and fees possible scholarships and the qualifications required for acceptance.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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