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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher dm96
Dear sir, I am interested in teaching Korean and Korean Cookery. I have seen that your guide for last term does not include these courses, but I understand there are now large numbers of second and third-generation Koreans living in this part of the city who may be keen to learn more about their language and culture. I have a Bachelor of Science degree and a teaching diploma. I hold special qualifications in language teaching and cookery. I was a science teacher in Korea, but moved to San Francisco in 2010. There, I taught Korean for Beginners and Korean Cookery at two community colleges. The language course assumed students had no prior knowledge of Korean. It gave them simple everyday language, as well as recognition of the alphabet. The cookery course focused on easy meal preparation and the art of pickling, or kim chi. In Vancouver, I could teach the same courses as previously, or we could devise new ones, depending on what the college considered its market to be. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Kim Stevenson
Dear sir,

I
am interested
in teaching Korean and Korean
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Cookery
. I have
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seen
that your guide for last term does not include these
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courses
,
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but
I understand there are
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now
large numbers of second and third-generation Koreans living in this part of the city who may be keen to learn more about their
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language
and culture.

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I
have a Bachelor of Science degree and a teaching diploma.
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I
hold special qualifications in
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language
teaching and
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cookery
.
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I
was a science teacher in Korea,
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but
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moved
to San Francisco in 2010. There, I taught Korean for Beginners and Korean
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Cookery
at two community colleges. The
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language
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course
assumed students had no prior knowledge of Korean. It gave them simple everyday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
,
as well
as recognition of the alphabet. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cookery
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course
focused on easy meal preparation and the art of pickling, or
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kim chi
.

In Vancouver, I could teach the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
as previously, or we could devise new ones, depending on what the college considered its market to be.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kim Stevenson
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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180 words
6.0
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