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1. There is a problem related to the changing room of your gym in your community. You reported it several times, but it was not solved. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the problem • what they said while reporting the problem • what you want the manager to do.

1. There is a problem related to the changing room of your gym in your community. You reported it several times, but it was not solved. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the problem • what they said while reporting the problem • what you want the manager to do. qr15
Dear Manager, My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I am a member of your Fit and Slim center for the past six months. I enjoy the facilities you have provided in your fitness center. However, I am writing to complain about the water leakage issue on the roof of changing rooms, which is creating a problem for all the members. The members are unable to change the dress because of this problem. Besides, we cannot keep our gym bags on the wooden drawers which are shared by the members of a gym. I have reported this issue thrice to your supervisor. Plus, I had a word with your gym instructors regarding the water leakage problems in a few changing rooms. Though, your gym workers said that the issue will get a fix as earliest as possible. Unfortunately, no serious action has been taken since it is been more than a week since the incident has been reported to your staff. I would request you to please provide a Zumba classroom until this problem gets solved as currently there are no Zumba classes running in the gym. I hope you understand the situation and will resolve the problem as earliest as possible. Yours faithfully, Shwatank Bhasin
Dear Manager,

My name is
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Shwatank
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Bhasin
, and I am a member of your Fit and Slim center for the past six months. I enjoy the facilities you have provided in your fitness center.
However
, I am writing to complain about the water leakage issue on the roof of changing rooms, which is creating a
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problem
for all the members.

The members are unable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the dress
because of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
.
Besides
, we cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
our gym bags on the wooden drawers which
are shared
by the members of a gym.

I have reported this issue thrice to your supervisor. Plus, I had a word with your gym instructors regarding the water leakage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
in a few changing rooms. Though, your gym workers said that the issue will
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get
a
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fix
as
Did you mean "early"?
earliest
as possible. Unfortunately, no serious action has
been taken
since it
is been
more than a week since the incident has
been reported
to your staff.

I would request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
provide a Zumba classroom until this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
solved as
currently
there are no Zumba classes running in the gym.

I hope you understand the situation and will resolve the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
as
Did you mean "early"?
earliest
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Shwatank
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Bhasin
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IELTS letter 1. There is a problem related to the changing room of your gym in your community. You reported it several times, but it was not solved. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the problem • what they said while reporting the problem • what you want the manager to do.

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6.0
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