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you and your friends are planning to go to Dubai on vacation.

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Dear Manager, I am Urja From India. Me and my four friends are planning to go on vacation to dubai for one week from 1st of December to 7th of December. We are confused because there are many options available to stay in dubai but I found your hotel and I am very excited to know about services that you provide. We need two rooms and 2 extra beds because we are coming with our childrens. We need some extra service like cattle and milke as well as cab service for sightseeing and pick-up and drop service from airpot as we are travelling with toddler it would be great if cab come on time. I will be happy if you could respond rapidly because we are bit confused about facilities, you can provide. As we are staying for long time I am expecating some discount from your end. Please Email me details at: amnda123@gmail. com. You can reached out to me at given number with more details at: +91 1234988332. Hope to hear from you soon so i can make my plans. Thanks, Sincerely yours, Urja

Dear Manager,

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Urja
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 and my four friends are planning to go on vacation to Possible spelling mistake found.Dubai
dubai
 for one week from 1st of December to 7th of December.

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because
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very
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because
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childrens
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some
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milke
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service
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airpot
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come
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because
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bit
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expecating
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some
 discount from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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details
 at: amnda123@gmail. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
. You can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "reach"reach
reached
 out to me at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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details
 at: +91 1234988332. Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
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so
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i
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my plans.

Thanks,

Sincerely
 yours,

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Urja