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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. QdML
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to thank you for looking after me when I was lying unconscious on the side of the road on March 6th. My name is Saichand and I am working as a Sales department manager in Flipkart. I am deeply indebted to you for taking care of me. After I woke up in the hospital bed, the doctors told me that you signed as a guardian for me and paid the hospital bills. You checked my belongings and informed my family about the accident. You were there in the hospital beside me till my family members reached the hospital. I cannot thank you enough for the amount of concern you showed on me. Me and my family members would love to have you visit us for lunch on March 28th on Sunday. We would like to thank you for saving a person unknown to you and express our gratitude. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Sai Chand Paruchuri.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to thank you for looking after me when I was lying unconscious on the side of the road on March 6th.

My name is
Saichand and
I am working as a Sales department manager in Flipkart. I am
deeply
indebted to you for taking care of me. After I woke up in the hospital bed, the doctors
told
me that you signed as a guardian for me and paid the hospital bills. You
checked
my belongings and informed my family about the accident. You were there in the hospital beside me till my family members reached the hospital.

I cannot thank you
enough
for the amount of concern you
showed
on me. Me and my family members would
love
to have you visit us for lunch on March 28th on Sunday. We would like to thank you for saving a person unknown to you and express our gratitude.

I look forward to hearing back from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sai
Chand
Paruchuri
.
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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