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You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You do NOT need to write your own address.

You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better. You do NOT need to write your own address. yKkE
Dear sir, I would like to express my views regarding your restaurant, “Khazana” at Milton. Previous week me and my friends went there to celebrate my birthday and to enjoy dinner. My friends was very happy with your delicious food and best customer service by your employees. They all appraise about your 24K dal which was prepared authentically by stiring regularly for 24 hours. The customer service and satisfaction was done great by your employees. Everytime I receive hot and delicious food. The ambiance of restaurant was never forgotable. I saw that kind of atmosphere after a long period of time. On the other hand, I would suggest you to add more dishes of Non-vegetarian as well. As one of my friend like non-vegetarian more, he found very less choice in it. Overall, It was a great experience of me celebrated birthday at your’s restaurant. It makes my birthday rememberable. Once again, thank you so much for your delicious food and great service. Yours faithfully Gaurav Babbar
Dear sir,

I would like to express my views regarding your restaurant, “
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Khazana
” at Milton. Previous week me and my friends went there to celebrate my birthday and to enjoy dinner.

My friends
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was
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very
happy with your delicious food and best customer service by your employees. They all appraise about your 24K
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dal
which
was prepared
authentically
by
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stiring
regularly
for 24 hours. The customer service and satisfaction
was done
great by your employees.
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Everytime
I receive hot and delicious food. The ambiance of restaurant was never
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forgotable
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
that kind of atmosphere after a long period of time.

On the other hand
, I would suggest you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
more dishes of Non-vegetarian
as well
. As one of my friend like non-vegetarian more, he found
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
less choice in it.

Overall
, It was a great experience of me celebrated birthday at
Did you mean "your" or "yours"?
your’s
restaurant. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
my birthday rememberable.

Once again, thank you
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so
much for your delicious food and great service.

Yours
faithfully


Gaurav
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Babbar

IELTS letter You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better. You do NOT need to write your own address.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
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