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To invite the guests to the Memory Day

To invite the guests to the Memory Day XVdmw
Dear Sir On behalf of the school, we would like to invite you to our Memory Day that be held on the 9th of May 2020 at 8. 30 pm onwards on your school campus. At the event, cultural programs dance, singing and drama will be performed by our pupils. Our honarable guests Mr Kurendra Kha, Mr Tadjayev Mirathy and Mr Anirudh Agarzwall will distrubute prizes and sertificates to the pupils. We have also arranged a delicious dinner at 10. 00 pm at this event. We sincerely hope thatyou will be able confirm your attendance at this invitation on or before 7 th May 2020 by contacting us at 913453346734 or emailng us at zufer@gmail. com. We look forward to your presence on the Memory Day. Yours sincerely
Dear Sir

On behalf of the school, we would like to invite you to our Memory Day that
be held
on the 9th of May 2020 at 8. 30 pm onwards on your school campus. At the
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event
, cultural programs dance, singing and drama will
be performed
by our pupils. Our
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honarable
guests Mr
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Kurendra
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Kha
, Mr
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Tadjayev
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Mirathy
and Mr
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Anirudh
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Agarzwall
will
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distrubute
prizes and
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sertificates
to the pupils. We have
also
arranged a delicious dinner at 10. 00 pm at this
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event
. We
sincerely
hope
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thatyou
will be
The preposition 'to' is required in front of the verb 'confirm'.
able confirm
your attendance at this invitation on or
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before
Did you mean "7th"?
7 th
May 2020 by contacting us at 913453346734 or
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emailng
us at
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zufer@gmail
.
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com
.

We look forward to your presence on the Memory Day.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter To invite the guests to the Memory Day

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
127 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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