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The head of firm and wife are celebrating their 25th wedding anniversary and have invited you to the event. Write a letter thanking them for the invitation and saying why you will be unable to attend .

The head of firm and wife are celebrating their 25th wedding anniversary and have invited you to the event. Write a letter thanking them for the invitation and saying why you will be unable to attend. q5BAw

Dear Sir I thank you for your recent invitation to your 25th wedding anniversary but I shall not be able to attend. Unfortunately, I shall not celebrate your happy time with you since my husband's birthday is on the same day. It is truly essential for me. Moreover, all guests are invited to our party. I must cook extraordinarily delious meal. Foods should be freshly prepared. Special drinks will be served to the people who are strictly respected by my family. All of them take me time. The reason for that I shall not cope with attending to your event. I politely ask you to honestly estimate my state. Thank you again for the invitation. Yours faithfully, John Smith.

Dear Sir

I thank you for your recent invitation to your 25th wedding anniversary This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I shall not be able to attend.

Unfortunately, I shall not celebrate your happy time with you since my husband's birthday is on the same day. It is truly
 essential for me. Moreover
, all guests are invited
 to our party. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 cook extraordinarily
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delious
 meal. Foods should be freshly
 prepared. Special drinks will be served
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who are strictly
 respected by my family. All of them take me time. The reason for that I shall not cope with attending to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. I politely
 ask you to honestly
 estimate my state.

Thank you again for the invitation. Yours faithfully
, John Smith. 

IELTS letter The head of firm and wife are celebrating their 25th wedding anniversary and have invited you to the event. Write a letter thanking them for the invitation and saying why you will be unable to attend.

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

119 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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