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The head of firm and wife are celebrating their 25th wedding anniversary and have invited you to the event. Write a letter thanking them for the invitation and saying why you will be unable to attend .

The head of firm and wife are celebrating their 25th wedding anniversary and have invited you to the event. Write a letter thanking them for the invitation and saying why you will be unable to attend. q5BAw
Dear Sir I thank you for your recent invitation to your 25th wedding anniversary but I shall not be able to attend. Unfortunately, I shall not celebrate your happy time with you since my husband's birthday is on the same day. It is truly essential for me. Moreover, all guests are invited to our party. I must cook extraordinarily delious meal. Foods should be freshly prepared. Special drinks will be served to the people who are strictly respected by my family. All of them take me time. The reason for that I shall not cope with attending to your event. I politely ask you to honestly estimate my state. Thank you again for the invitation. Yours faithfully, John Smith.
Dear Sir

I thank you for your recent invitation to your 25th wedding anniversary
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I shall not be able to attend.

Unfortunately, I shall not celebrate your happy time with you since my husband's birthday is on the same day. It is
truly
essential for me.
Moreover
, all guests
are invited
to our party. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
cook
extraordinarily
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delious
meal. Foods should be
freshly
prepared. Special drinks will
be served
to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who are
strictly
respected by my family. All of them take me time. The reason for that I shall not cope with attending to your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. I
politely
ask you to
honestly
estimate my state.

Thank you again for the invitation. Yours
faithfully
, John Smith.
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IELTS letter The head of firm and wife are celebrating their 25th wedding anniversary and have invited you to the event. Write a letter thanking them for the invitation and saying why you will be unable to attend.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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