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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job.

You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. 85j9w

Dear Miss Johnson I am writing to apply a position of a tourist guide in your museum that was advertised in, , The weekly details". I am thirty-seven years old and obtained a degree in Teaching English as a foreign language at Universiy of World Languages in 2005. My previous experience includes four years with the, , Hilton" hotel where I worked as a receptionist manager. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am proactive and able to handle multiple task simultaneously. I am sociable and I can get well with new people easily. Besides, I am eager beaver in learning history, especially in history of the nature. In addition to this, I participate in Language course. I am learning Arabic nowadays. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your company. Yours sincerely, Emily Whatson.

Dear Miss Johnson

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