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You have arranged a plan for travel and accommodation for your friends. Write a letter to them and - remind them about the plans, - inform him about the accomodation. - suggest what things they should bring to the trip.

You have arranged a plan for travel and accommodation for your friends. Write a letter to them and - remind them about the plans, - inform him about the accomodation. - suggest what things they should bring to the trip. qV7qa
Dear Richard I hope that this letters finds you in great health and radiant. I am informing you about the hotel and flight ticket to Kurukshetra. It has been long time to meet each other as our schedule is busy. However the upcoming vacations of diwali festial will be used to visit at kurukshetra. Moreover, this city has a number of tourist attractions such as Krishna Museum, Temples and many more which would be visited by us. In addition to it, the Zoo of pills is famous in this area. I have booked the room no. 111 in the Amigo hotel because it is extremely neat and clean space. The one of the most attracting thing is tha quality of food due to which lots of people. visit there every day for meals. Also, it is near to the railway stations and the Airport which makes it easy to you to reach here. This areas is neither hot nor cold, and so the warm clothes should not be brought instead of it you should keep some t-shirts and trosurs in your bag. Furthermore, my camera is not working properly thus it would be better if you take your camera while visiting. I hope hear you soon Elaine.
Dear Richard

I hope that this letters finds you in great health and radiant. I am informing you about the hotel and flight ticket to
Kurukshetra
.

It has been long time to
meet
each other as our schedule is busy.
However
the upcoming vacations of
diwali
festial
will be
used
to visit at
kurukshetra
.
Moreover
, this city has a number of tourist attractions such as Krishna Museum, Temples and
many
more which would
be visited
by us.
In addition
to it, the Zoo of pills is
famous
in this area.

I have booked the room no. 111 in the Amigo hotel
because
it is
extremely
neat and clean space. The one of the most attracting thing is
tha
quality of food due to which lots of
people
.
visit
there every day for meals.
Also
, it is near to the railway stations and the Airport which
makes
it easy to you to reach here.

This
areas
is
neither hot nor
cold
, and
so
the warm clothes should not
be brought
instead
of it you should
keep
some
t-shirts and
trosurs
in your bag.
Furthermore
, my camera is not working
properly
thus
it would be better if you take your camera while visiting.

I hope hear you
soon


Elaine.
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IELTS letter You have arranged a plan for travel and accommodation for your friends. Write a letter to them and - remind them about the plans, - inform him about the accomodation. - suggest what things they should bring to the trip.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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