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You are working in a company and your colleague is not doing well job. Wrtie a letter to your manager to this concern.

You are working in a company and your colleague is not doing well job. Wrtie a letter to your manager to this concern. 6xEnj
Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to you, that I have been working in your company on the post of attendant, and my colleague working on the post of software engineer is not cooperating with me. It is wonderful, to be noted, that since, my posting as an attendant, in your company, I have been working with the responsibility, and from last few days, there is an error coming in my computer which made me hard to work due to fault for not updating a software. I immediately called to the software engineer of my company being my colleague but he is not paying attention to solve my computer problems, and I am facing some problems from my clients, who deemed me irresponsible. I inform to you, that kindly make necessary direction to my colleague, to solve my computer problems immediately. I hope you will find a better solution to my concern. I shall thankful for your this kindness. Ragards, Ranjit Singh.
Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to you, that I have been working in your
company
on the post of attendant, and my colleague working on the post of software engineer is not cooperating with me. It is wonderful, to
be noted
, that since, my posting as an attendant, in your
company
, I have been working with the responsibility, and from last few days, there is an error coming in my computer which made me
hard
to work due to fault for not updating a software. I immediately called to the software engineer of my
company
being my colleague
but
he is not paying attention to solve my computer problems, and I am facing
some
problems from my clients, who deemed me irresponsible. I inform to you, that kindly
make
necessary direction to my colleague, to solve my computer problems immediately.
I
hope you will find a better solution to my concern.
I
shall thankful
for your this kindness.
Ragards
,
Ranjit
Singh.
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IELTS letter You are working in a company and your colleague is not doing well job. Wrtie a letter to your manager to this concern.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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