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Write a letter to manager for receiving a wrong dress i.e. different color and size from the original order

Write a letter to manager for receiving a wrong dress i. e. different color and size from the original order XG69A
Dear Manager, I am writing about the problem I faced with a product which i have ordered online from your store's website. Though I have ordered for long red dress, I have received a dress with different colour and size. I would like you to exchange this dress with my original order product, in additional provide me some discount as compensation for the mistake and my disappointment. Last week, I have ordered for a long sleeveless dress, which comes in various color and size. I have selected a peach color dress and size small for me. After receiving the order, I am disappointed to discover that size and color of the dress are incorrect. Instead of the one I ordered, dress was badly ill-fitted as it was size medium and it was red in color which was too bright for me. I think your company should compensate me for my disappointment and mistake committed in addition to exchanging this order with my original order. . Please let me know if we both agree on this solution. Thank you in advance and looking forward to receiving my new coat. Sincerely Sindura
Dear Manager,

I am writing about the problem I faced with a product which
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have
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ordered
online from your store's website. Though I have
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ordered
for long red
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dress
, I have received a
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dress
with
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different
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colour
and
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size
. I would like you to exchange this
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dress
with my original
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order
product, in additional provide me
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some
discount as compensation for the mistake and my disappointment.

Last week, I have
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ordered
for a long sleeveless
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dress
, which
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comes
in various
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color
and
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size
. I have selected a peach
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color
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dress
and
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size
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small
for me.

After receiving the
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order
, I
am disappointed
to discover that
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size
and
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color
of the
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dress
are incorrect.
Instead
of the one I
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ordered
,
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dress
was
badly
ill-fitted as it was
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size
medium and it
was red
in
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color
which was too bright for me.

I
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think
your
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company
should compensate me for my disappointment and mistake committed
in addition
to exchanging this
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order
with my original
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order
.
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.
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let
me know if we both
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agree
on this solution.

Thank you in advance and looking forward to receiving my new coat.

Sincerely


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Sindura
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IELTS letter Write a letter to manager for receiving a wrong dress i. e. different color and size from the original order

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189 words
5.5
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