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Letter to my friend regarding a holiday plan

Letter to my friend regarding a holiday plan 2b8nb
Dear Sandy, Iam Ragav from India. Iam writing this letter to express my thought about your plan to ooty. I think you were planning for a caming trip to enjoy all kinds of entertainments and also spending time on some leisure activities. As you are a friendly person, you always like to spend your free time with your beloved-ones. I asked few of my commrades about the place which you have planned for your summer holidays. I came to know that there will be a disturbances because of some wild animals. They will be in a search of foods especially in summer season. He recommend us to be very cautious in our whole trip this is the only drawback. However, Iam very interested in being with you at the vacation. As my friend is a tourist guide in that location, there would not be any problem in our stay. He will arrange us a good and safety place to enjoy our excursion. Iam very gleeful to meet you and our friends. Please update me the date of our jouney without any procrastination. Yours lovingly, Ragav.
Dear Sandy,

Iam
Ragav
from India.
Iam
writing this letter to express my
thought
about your plan to
ooty
.

I
think
you were planning for a
caming
trip to enjoy all kinds of entertainments and
also
spending time on
some
leisure activities. As you are a friendly person, you always like to spend your free time with your beloved-ones.

I asked few of my
commrades
about the place which you have planned for your summer holidays. I came to know that there will be
a disturbances
because
of
some
wild animals. They will be in a search of foods
especially
in summer season. He
recommend
us to be
very
cautious in our whole trip this is the
only
drawback.

However
,
Iam
very
interested in being with you at the vacation. As my friend is a tourist guide in that location, there would not be any problem in our stay. He will arrange us a
good
and safety place to enjoy our excursion.

Iam
very
gleeful to
meet
you and our friends.
Please
update me the date of our
jouney
without any procrastination.

Yours
lovingly
,

Ragav
.
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IELTS letter Letter to my friend regarding a holiday plan

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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