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You have recentlybeen preselected to start studies at a prestigious University. However, you still need to be admitted. Write an application letter to the Dean. In your letter: •Introduce yourself •Thank him for being considered •Express your interest in the university •Explain why you should be admitted

You have recentlybeen preselected to start studies at a prestigious University. However, you still need to be admitted. Write an application letter to the Dean. In your letter: •Introduce yourself •Thank him for being considered •Express your interest in the university •Explain why you should be admitted oEE03

Dear Sir, Thankyou for the amazing opportunity and your consideration. My name is Rajni and I have applied for the Masters of commerce in your prestigious university. I have been a long time follower of the prosperous activities in the university. My friend is a recent graduate of this varsity. Although I have done a small research on this university before applying for further studies. There is no comparison in terms of quality education, world class professional experience, lessons that students get to learn here. The high rate of campus placements from this university reflects the quality of education one can get by studying here. I am very much keen to be a part of this university I have graduated with 92% overall in the bachelors of commerce and I believe, I have potential to reach great heights of success. I have applied for Masters degree of commerce and I will be priviledged once my admission has been confirmed. This would add great opportunity and will open endevaours for my successful career ahead. Yours sincerely Rajni

Dear Sir,

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. My friend is a recent graduate of this varsity.

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I have graduated with 92% overall
 in the bachelors of commerce and I believe, I have potential to reach great heights of success. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have applied for For an academic degree, use "Master’s".Master’s
Masters
 degree of commerce and I will be Possible spelling mistake found.privileged
priviledged
 once my admission has been confirmed
. This would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 great opportunity and will open Possible spelling mistake found.endeavors
endevaours
 for my successful career ahead.

Yours sincerely


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Rajni