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Application letter for the position of chef

Application letter for the position of chef oVDJB

Dear Sir/ MadamI am writing to apply for the job of chef which I saw advertised in local internet site "Vacation in Kokand" on Monday, June 15, 2021. I am 37 years old and I have a diploma in cooking. I have 15 years of experience in field of cooking industry. As a proactive worker I am able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. In addition to experience as a chook, I have an excellent knowledge of baking cakes and breads. Most recently, I worked for "Benazir" baking factory as their chef. While I was here I filled the menu with foreign cuisine. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as playing tennis and riding a horse. If you would like me to attend an interview I would able to come at any time convenient to you as I do want to be a member of your restaurant. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Lola Olimova

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