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Write a letter to your manager about the party that you want to organize at the resturent reason for organizing the party time and location of the event describe what arrangements need to be done.

Write a letter to your manager about the party that you want to organize at the resturent reason for organizing the party time and location of the event describe what arrangements need to be done. MoLOp
Dear sir, I hope you are fine. I am writing a letter to request you to attend on my 28th birthday blash party in harvard resturant on 20st june. Firstly, I am Alash Sanjel from damak municipality from last 2decades. However, from next month I will be turned into 28th years old. Furthermore, I want to give suprise to my friends and realtives. In addition, its been years we havent chill and get together. Additionally, I had organised a party in wellness certified cafe. Likewise, I had booked for night at 6pm at harvard resturant which is near to my home. Similarly, i already put my location and details in greeting card for your easy. As a result, I would like to have a nice collections of lighting, dj music, setup and meals. Also, I want to make a special and super satisfied to all my collegues and parents. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours faithfully, Alash sanjel
Dear sir, I hope you are fine. I am writing a letter to request you to attend on my 28th birthday
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blash
party in
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harvard
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resturant
on 20st
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june
.
Firstly
, I am
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Alash
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Sanjel
from
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damak
municipality from last 2decades.
However
, from
next
month I will
be turned
into 28th years
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old
.
Furthermore
, I want to give
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suprise
to my friends and
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realtives
.
In addition
,
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its
been years we
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havent
chill and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together.
Additionally
, I had
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organised
a party in wellness certified
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
.
Likewise
, I had booked for night at 6pm at
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harvard
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resturant
which is near to my home.
Similarly
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
already put my location and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
in greeting card for your easy.
As a result
, I would like to have a nice
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "collection"?
collections
of lighting,
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dj
music, setup and meals.
Also
, I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a special and super satisfied to all my
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collegues
and parents. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours
faithfully
,
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Alash
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
sanjel

IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager about the party that you want to organize at the resturent reason for organizing the party time and location of the event describe what arrangements need to be done.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
5.0
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