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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter • give details of your course • explain why you need a week off • say what you want the Principal to do.

You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter • give details of your course • explain why you need a week off • say what you want the Principal to do. 3jRm
The Prinicpal, Anna University, Chennai. Subject: Requestiion for the permission for week off Dear Sir, This is Senthil Prabhu currently pursuing 3rd year Mechanical Engineering course at the Anna University. I wanted to attend and also help my family in the preparation for my sister’s marrige which is going to be held in the next week at my home town. So I am requesting you to grant me a permission for a week off. Thanking You, Senthil Prabhu
The
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Prinicpal
,

Anna University,

Chennai.

Subject:
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Requestiion
for the permission for week off

Dear Sir,

This is
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Senthil
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Prabhu
currently
pursuing 3rd year Mechanical Engineering course at the Anna University. I wanted to attend and
also
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help
my family in the preparation for my sister’s
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marrige
which is going to
be held
in the
next
week at my home town.
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So
I am requesting you to grant me a permission for a week off.

Thanking You,

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Senthil
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Prabhu

IELTS letter You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter • give details of your course • explain why you need a week off • say what you want the Principal to do.

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