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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You do NOT need to write your own address

You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start. You do NOT need to write your own address jqEw
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding my joining date for the Mathematical teaching assistant position at your center. I sincerely apologise that I will be not able to join on a pre-agreed date. Please kindly accept my apology for any inconveniences that may cause. As you know, I am already working as an intern at an international school, and it will finish this week as planned. However, because of covid-19 pandemic, we have to postpone and my internship time will last two more weeks as scheduled. It will be inconvenient to you, but I want to emphasise that I really hope to work under your íntitution. If possible, could you kindly give me another opportunity working with you after I finish my university time. I am looking forward to your response and working with you in the near future. Yours faithfully, Hie.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you regarding my joining date for the Mathematical teaching assistant position at your center. I
sincerely
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apologise
that I will be not able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
on a pre-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
date.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
kindly accept my apology for any inconveniences that may cause.

As you know, I am already working as an intern at an international school, and it will finish this week as planned.
However
,
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because
of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
pandemic, we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
postpone and my internship time will last two more weeks as scheduled.

It will be inconvenient to you,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I want to
Possible spelling mistake. 'emphasise' is British English.
emphasise
that I
really
hope to work under your
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íntitution
. If possible, could you kindly give me another opportunity working with you after I finish my university time.

I am looking forward to your response and working with you in the near future.

Yours
faithfully
,

Hie.
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IELTS letter You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start. You do NOT need to write your own address

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
146 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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