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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution rP5p
Dear Anna, Hi. It has been a long time since I wrote to you, and I hope you well. I am writing to ask you for some information about the colleges in London. Recently, I would like to study Mathematical education in England next year, and it will be great if you can give me some advice. This year, I am studying Mathematics in Vietnam, and my university time will finish in June as scheduled. I want to continue to study for a master's degree in another country, and England is my choice. However, I don't have much knowledge about it, so could you send me some information about different colleges in your area. If I want to apply for a scholarship, which qualifications I need to prepare. I hope you don't mind doing it for me. I think it's much better to ask you than searching on the internet. Hope to hear from you soon with more detailed information. Many thanks. Lots of love, Hie.
Dear Anna,

Hi. It has been a long time since I wrote to you, and I hope you well. I am writing to ask you for
some
information about the colleges in London.

Recently, I would like to study Mathematical education in England
next
year, and it will be great if you can give me
some
advice. This year, I am studying Mathematics in Vietnam, and my university time will finish in June as scheduled. I want to continue to study for a master's degree in another country, and England is my choice.
However
, I don't have much knowledge about it,
so
could you
send
me
some
information about
different
colleges in your area. If I want to apply for a scholarship, which qualifications I need to prepare.

I hope you don't mind doing it for me. I
think
it's much better to ask you than searching on the internet.

Hope to hear from you
soon
with more detailed information.
Many
thanks.

Lots of
love
,

Hie.
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IELTS letter You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

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166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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