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Writing a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things

Writing a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things 9qGx
I am Barkha Suthar. Iam writing this letter to request you to check my things which I left in your hotel room. I stayed in your hotel on 5th to 7th march 2021. I was in room number 202. I left my laptop charger and file which carries my office details. The charger is of Dell company and a file color is red I would like to inform you that those both the things are very important for me. Because without charger I can not operate my laptop and my work is stop. Nowadays because of this pandemic I am doing work from home. A file which has the details of my work is also important for me. Without this two things my work is not done properly.
I am
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Barkha
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Suthar
.
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Iam
writing this letter to request you to
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check
my things which I
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left
in your hotel room. I stayed in your hotel on 5th to 7th
The month "March" needs to be capitalized.
march
2021. I was in room number 202.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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left
my laptop charger and file which carries my office
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details
. The charger is of Dell
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company
and a file color is
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red


I would like to inform you that those both the things are
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very
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important
for me.
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Because
without charger I can not operate my laptop and my
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work
is
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stop
. Nowadays
because of this
pandemic I am doing
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work
from home. A file which has the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of my
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work
is
also
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important
for me. Without this two things my
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work
is not done
properly
.

IELTS letter Writing a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
128 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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