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NESCAFE:STAMMERING STAND-UP COMEDIANS.

NESCAFE: STAMMERING STAND-UP COMEDIANS. AB8pl
HELLO, GOOD MORNING EVERYONE. MY TOPIC IS MY FAVORITE ADVERTISEMNET IS NESCAFE: STAMMERING STAND UP COMEDIAN. THIS ADVERTISEMENT IS ABOUT OF A BOY. HE IS A STAND UP COMEDIAN BUT HE HAS STEMMERING PROBLEM. THE BOY IS TELL THE STORY ABOUT HIS LIFE AT THE SHOW. HE TELLS THE AUDIENCE THE BIGGEST STREANGTH OF A STUTTER IS SUSPENSE. NOT EVERY AUDIENCE IS AS PATIENCE AS YOU. THE BOY GO TO THE HOME. HE IS OPEN THE DOOR OF FREEDGE AND TAKE A NASCAFE COFFE PACKET. HE MAKES A COFFE AND DRINK A COFFE AND SEE THE YOU TUBE VIDEO BUT THE VIDEO IS BUFFER. THEN HE THINKS, BUFFER TAKES A TIME TO START THE VIDEO SO AS WELL AS STUTTER HAS TAKE A TIME FOR SPEAKING, HE THINKS STUTTER ISN'T PROBLEM. IT IS A PROCESS OF A SPEAK AND HE LAUGH OWN SELF.
HELLO,
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GOOD
MORNING EVERYONE. MY TOPIC IS MY FAVORITE
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ADVERTISEMNET
IS NESCAFE: STAMMERING STAND UP COMEDIAN. THIS ADVERTISEMENT IS ABOUT OF A BOY. HE IS A STAND UP COMEDIAN
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BUT
HE HAS
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STEMMERING
PROBLEM. THE BOY IS
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TELL
THE STORY ABOUT HIS LIFE AT THE
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SHOW
. HE
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TELLS
THE AUDIENCE THE BIGGEST
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STREANGTH
OF A STUTTER IS SUSPENSE. NOT EVERY AUDIENCE IS AS PATIENCE AS YOU. THE BOY GO TO THE HOME. HE IS OPEN THE DOOR OF
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FREEDGE
AND TAKE A
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NASCAFE
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COFFE
PACKET. HE
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MAKES
A
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COFFE
AND DRINK A
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COFFE
AND
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SEE
Possible typo. Did you mean "THE" or "YOU"?
THE YOU
TUBE VIDEO
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BUT
THE VIDEO IS BUFFER. THEN HE
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THINKS
, BUFFER TAKES A TIME TO
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START
THE VIDEO
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SO
AS WELL
AS STUTTER HAS
Use past participle here: "taken".
TAKE
A TIME FOR SPEAKING, HE
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THINKS
STUTTER ISN'T PROBLEM. IT IS A PROCESS OF A SPEAK AND HE
The pronoun 'HE' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "laughs", "laughed".
LAUGH
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OWN
SELF.
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IELTS letter NESCAFE: STAMMERING STAND-UP COMEDIANS.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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