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you have recently started a new job. Write a letter to your friends to tell them about it and invite them for an evening meal.

you have recently started a new job. Write a letter to your friends to tell them about it and invite them for an evening meal. 0A2MO
Dear Prem and Jigo, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of sprits. I am writing this letter to inform you about my dream job that I am looking for for so long time and I finally get it. I invite both of you for dinner at my place in Montreal city. As you know that, from last two months I am eagerly looking to start new career in MNC organization. This role is senior Softwere Developer. My main duty to work on project with direct clients. Company already provide me accomadation in the main area of city. If you both travel by plain let me know so, I will pick you from airport directly. Otherwise, you travel by car I will send you my location so, you will come directly at my home. You do not need to worry about your accomadation because, My house has 3 bedrooms. You will stay at my home. I also planned our dinner at famous restaurent in montreal. It is famous for authanticate gujarati food and I know you both will love it. Hope to see you soon! yours truly Keyur Patel
Dear
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Prem
and
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Jigo
,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of
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sprits
. I am writing this letter to inform you about my dream job that I am looking
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for for
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so
long time and I
finally
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get
it. I invite both of you for dinner at my place in Montreal city.

As you know that, from last two months I am
eagerly
looking to
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start
new career in
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MNC
organization. This role is senior
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Softwere
Developer. My main duty to work on project with direct clients.
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Company
already provide me
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accomadation
in the main area of city.

If you both travel by plain
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let
me know
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so
, I will pick you from airport
directly
.
Otherwise
, you travel by car I will
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send
you my location
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so
, you will
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come
directly
at my home. You do not need to worry about your
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accomadation
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because
, My
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house
has 3 bedrooms. You will stay at my home. I
also
planned our dinner at
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famous
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restaurent
in
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montreal
. It is
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famous
for
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authanticate
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gujarati
food and I know you both will
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love
it.

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see
you
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soon
!

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yours
truly


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Keyur
Patel
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IELTS letter you have recently started a new job. Write a letter to your friends to tell them about it and invite them for an evening meal.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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