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you have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. write a letter to the company .

you have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. write a letter to the company. Lr1A3

Dear sir/madam, My name is Mandeep Kaur and I am writing to you regarding a Lenovo laptop computer that I bought from your departmental store on 55th street, Red Deer on the 5th September. The laptop seemed work properly at your store. However, upon returning home, it become clear the keypad is not functioning properly and also, the scratch on the screen. I therefore, returned to the shop on the following day, on the 6th September, and spoke the shopkeeper about the issue. He said, he will be view the problem and repair the laptop and get back to me in few days. However, it has now been over a weak and when I concern to the shop, he said that it is not fixed now it will take some more time. and they do not know how long it will be. As I am sure you will understand, it is now acceptable to be waiting for such a long time. I would request that I be given a full refund should I not received the repaired laptop within a week. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully Mandeep Kaur

Dear sir/madam,

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.Man deepAmandeepSandeep
Mandeep
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Kaur, and
Kaur and
 I am writing to you regarding a Lenovo You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 computer that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your departmental store on 55th street, Red Deer on the 5th September.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 seemed work properly
 at your store. However
, upon returning home, it Did you mean "becomes"?becomes
become
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 the keypad is not functioning properly
 and also
, the scratch on the screen.

I therefore
, returned to the shop on the following day, on the 6th September, and spoke the shopkeeper about the issue. He said, he will be view the problem and repair the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 back to me in few days.

However
, it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 been over a weak and when I concern to the shop, he said that it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it will take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 more time. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 they do not know how long it will be.

As I am sure you will understand, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 acceptable to be waiting for such a long time. I would request that I be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 a full refund should I not received the repaired You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 within a week.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.Man deepAmandeepSandeep
Mandeep
Possible spelling mistake found.AUR
Kaur