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Request for the Electronic Item to shop Owner

Request for the Electronic Item to shop Owner GMDnj
Dear Sir, I'm writing this letter to inquire about the Philips RZ Trimmer at your store. Today unfortunately my trimmer was damaged, and I'm looking to buy a New trimmer. Need some information on the trimmer availability, features, and price. Firstly, can you please tell me if you have the Philip RZ Trimmer in stock? I'm specifically looking for the RZ version which has 20 mm settings which can be for both beard and hair shave. I would also want to check if the durability of the trimmer, and the blade coating of the trimmer, and also the accessories which will be provided along with the trimmer. Do you have the Trimmer in stock at your store and would also like to know the price of the trimmer? If you don't have the trimmer availability, can you please take a request for the trimmer. I do understand requesting for the product without making payment doesn't make sense. So, I can give you an advance of $50, and pay the remaining after collecting the product. Can you please let me know by when you can provide the trimmer and how long you can hold the trimmer for me at your store? I live near to your Jacksonville store on 34587. Please call me on 546-657-9876, once the trimmer is available. Yours Sincerely, John Smith
Dear Sir,

I'm writing this letter to inquire about the Philips
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RZ
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Trimmer
at your
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store
.
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Today
unfortunately my
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trimmer
was damaged
, and I'm looking to
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buy
a New
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trimmer
. Need
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some
information on the
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trimmer
availability, features, and price.

Firstly
, can you
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please
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tell
me if you have the Philip
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RZ
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Trimmer
in stock? I'm
specifically
looking for the
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RZ
version which has 20 mm settings which can be for both beard and hair shave. I would
also
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
if the durability of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trimmer
, and the blade coating of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trimmer
, and
also
the accessories which will
be provided
along with the trimmer.

Do you have the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Trimmer
in stock at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
and would
also
like to know the price of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trimmer
? If you don't have the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trimmer
availability, can you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
please
take a request for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trimmer
. I do understand requesting for the product without making payment doesn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sense.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I can give you an advance of $50, and pay the remaining after collecting the product. Can you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know by when you can provide the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trimmer
and how long you can hold the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trimmer
for me at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
? I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
near to your Jacksonville
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
on 34587.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Please
call me on 546-657-9876, once the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trimmer
is available.

Yours
Sincerely
,

John Smith
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IELTS letter Request for the Electronic Item to shop Owner

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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