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You have recently seen the youngsters in your area driving their bikes and cars recklessly. You have also seen them racing. Write a letter to the police department of your area. In the letter narrate the nuisance created and tell the problems that people in your area are facing.

You have recently seen the youngsters in your area driving their bikes and cars recklessly. You have also seen them racing. Write a letter to the police department of your area. In the letter narrate the nuisance created and tell the problems that people in your area are facing. gY6PO
Dear Sir, My name is Meghal Patel. I am writing this letter to inform you about the problem that the youngsters in our area driving bikes and cars recklessly and a number of times they do racing, that time they block the road and people facing lots of problem. The youngsters driving vehicles dangerously and do stunts such as lifting their front tyre off the road while balancing vehicle on the back wheel. All these stunts were performed, which make lots of noice. Because at that time vehicle speed was high, weaving through traffic and ignoring traffic signals due to this problem one day I saw an accident. They do this of nuisance and the people face lots of problem like reach home late. Some time the people stuck in the traffic. I hope you come in our area and take strict action against the youngster and reduce the our problem. Yours sincerely, Meghal Patel.
Dear Sir,

My name is
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Meghal
Patel. I am writing this letter to inform you about the problem that the youngsters in our area driving bikes and cars
recklessly
and a number of
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times
they
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do racing
, that
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time
they block the road and
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people
facing
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lots of problem
.

The youngsters driving vehicles
dangerously
and do stunts such as lifting their front
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tyre
off the road while balancing vehicle on the back wheel. All these stunts
were performed
, which
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make
lots of
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noice
.
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Because
at that
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time
vehicle speed was high, weaving through traffic and ignoring traffic signals due to this problem one day I
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saw
an accident. They do this of nuisance and the
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people
face
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lots of problem
like reach home late.
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Some
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time
the
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people
stuck in the traffic.

I hope you
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come
in our area and take strict action against the youngster and
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reduce
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "our problem" or "the problem"?
the our problem
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Meghal
Patel.

IELTS letter You have recently seen the youngsters in your area driving their bikes and cars recklessly. You have also seen them racing. Write a letter to the police department of your area. In the letter narrate the nuisance created and tell the problems that people in your area are facing.

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155 words
5.0
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