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One of your friends is interested in studying abroad but confused about which course to opt for. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: Explain which course to choose. Explain why this course is best. Invite your friend to discuss in person.

One of your friends is interested in studying abroad but confused about which course to opt for. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: Explain which course to choose. Explain why this course is best. Invite your friend to discuss in person. 53ggV

Dear Alex, Hope you and you family are all doing well, I have received your letter last week and I am glad that you are planning to do your masters in Australia. Firstly, the medical device industry in Australia is growing rapidly and the number of people to cater this requirement are very less, it would be good if you can select Bio-medical engineering as your graduate degree programme, as you get good insights to develop health care products and the opportunities are plenty. Secondly, this is 2-year programme, consists of theoretical and practical, it includes credit points in both biology and engineering, which is rare case in a master’s programme. Moreover, the hospital exposure during the course plays a crucial role in campus placement. As the coming Tuesday is a public holiday, I would like you to visit my place, to discuss in detail regarding the same. Looking forward to seeing you soon. All the best, Surya

Dear Alex,

Hope you and Possible mistake. Please verify.
you family
 are all doing well, I have received your letter last Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).week, and
week and
 I am glad that you are planning to do your masters in Australia.

Firstly
, the medical device industry in Australia is growing rapidly
 and the number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to cater this requirement are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 less, it would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 if you can select Bio-medical engineering as your graduate degree Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
, as you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 insights to develop health care products and the opportunities are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
.

Secondly
, this is 2-year Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
, consists of theoretical and practical, it includes credit points in both biology and engineering, which is rare case in a master’s Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
. Moreover
, the hospital exposure during the course plays a crucial role in campus placement.

As the coming Tuesday is a public holiday, I would like you to visit my place, to discuss in detail regarding the same.

Looking forward to seeing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

All the best,

Surya