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One of your friends is interested in studying abroad but confused about which course to opt for. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: Explain which course to choose. Explain why this course is best. Invite your friend to discuss in person.

One of your friends is interested in studying abroad but confused about which course to opt for. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: Explain which course to choose. Explain why this course is best. Invite your friend to discuss in person. 53ggV
Dear Alex, Hope you and you family are all doing well, I have received your letter last week and I am glad that you are planning to do your masters in Australia. Firstly, the medical device industry in Australia is growing rapidly and the number of people to cater this requirement are very less, it would be good if you can select Bio-medical engineering as your graduate degree programme, as you get good insights to develop health care products and the opportunities are plenty. Secondly, this is 2-year programme, consists of theoretical and practical, it includes credit points in both biology and engineering, which is rare case in a master’s programme. Moreover, the hospital exposure during the course plays a crucial role in campus placement. As the coming Tuesday is a public holiday, I would like you to visit my place, to discuss in detail regarding the same. Looking forward to seeing you soon. All the best, Surya
Dear Alex,

Hope you and
you family
are all doing well, I have received your letter last
week and
I am glad that you are planning to do your masters in Australia.

Firstly
, the medical device industry in Australia is growing
rapidly
and the number of
people
to cater this requirement are
very
less, it would be
good
if you can select Bio-medical engineering as your graduate degree
programme
, as you
get
good
insights to develop health care products and the opportunities are
plenty
.

Secondly
, this is 2-year
programme
, consists of theoretical and practical, it includes credit points in both biology and engineering, which is rare case in a master’s
programme
.
Moreover
, the hospital exposure during the course plays a crucial role in campus placement.

As the coming Tuesday is a public holiday, I would like you to visit my place, to discuss in detail regarding the same.

Looking forward to seeing you
soon
.

All the best,

Surya
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IELTS letter One of your friends is interested in studying abroad but confused about which course to opt for. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: Explain which course to choose. Explain why this course is best. Invite your friend to discuss in person.

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