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it was a fruitful learn that we had yesterday. I started teaching at international schools in Iran by the age of 19 and in a period of six years teaching I’ve worked with 2 school owing to my tendency to teach faithfully and conscientiously with a permanent working place. Teaching as both homeroom teacher and English teacher in different grades made me aware of both classroom language and literature weaknesses of the students which empower my lessons’ shape both educational and functional efficient.
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was a fruitful learn that we had yesterday. I
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teaching at international schools in Iran by the age of 19 and in a period of six years teaching I’ve worked with 2 school owing to my tendency to teach
faithfully
and
conscientiously
with a permanent working place. Teaching as both homeroom teacher and English teacher in
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different
grades made me aware of both classroom language and literature weaknesses of the students which empower my lessons’ shape both educational and functional efficient.
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IELTS letter class description of how good a student can be.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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