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This is your last year at school and you are unsure of what course to take at university. You have decided to write a letter to your former teacher , asking for advice.

This is your last year at school and you are unsure of what course to take at university. You have decided to write a letter to your former teacher, asking for advice. 96K2w
Dear, Mrs Anna Hi my teacher! How are you? How is it going? I'm fine thank you extremely much. I'm writing asking for advice. I finished 11th class this year. Which university would you recommend me to apply to? I don't know which one to apply to. I will be happy if you advice me. Please, also tell me which subjects I need to prepare more from. Your words are very important for me. I am preparing from English now. I am reading plenty books. I wait to reply from you. Lots of love Merry
Dear, Mrs Anna

Hi my teacher! How are you? How is it going? I'm fine thank you
extremely
much. I'm writing asking for advice.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
finished 11th
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
this year. Which university would you recommend me to apply to? I don't know which one to apply to. I will be happy if you
Did you mean "advise" (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
advice
me.
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Please
,
also
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tell
me which subjects I need to prepare more from. Your words are
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very
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important
for me. I am preparing from English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. I am reading
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plenty
books.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
wait to reply from you.

Lots of
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love


Merry
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IELTS letter This is your last year at school and you are unsure of what course to take at university. You have decided to write a letter to your former teacher, asking for advice.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
94 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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