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You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, tell him/her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend

You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, tell him/her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend PdmX
Dear Chirag, Guess what I have ordered for you! Yes, you are right, it's a SmartWatch. It has extremely great features. To give you an idea about this watch, it is a digital watch and you can set custom wallpapers to make it more attractive. It tracks heart rate and number of calories burned. Also, it is touchscreen and 100% waterproof. There was this flash sale announced on an e-commerce website, I luckily got a great deal. I have added your home address for the delivery, by this weekend it will be delivered to you, so please be available. I knew you wanted such kind of watch for a long time. Also, I vividly remember, you are a fitness freak, thus, this watch will always be your companion while you workout. Needless to say, it comes with a countdown timer that can help you to monitor exercise with time. Moreover, the watch also tracks the distance while you go cycling. This will definitely help you keep a record of your overall distance covered till now. I hope you will make the most out of this watch. Don't forget to share your feedback with me and say Hi to your brother and give my regards to your parents. Best wishes, Kunal Chavda
Dear
Chirag
,

Guess what I have ordered for you! Yes, you are right, it's a
SmartWatch
. It has
extremely
great features. To give you an
idea
about this
watch
, it is a digital
watch
and you can set custom wallpapers to
make
it more attractive. It
tracks
heart rate and number of calories burned.
Also
, it is touchscreen and 100% waterproof.

There was this flash sale announced on an e-commerce website, I luckily
got
a great deal. I have
added
your home address for the delivery, by this weekend it will
be delivered
to you,
so
please
be available. I knew you wanted such kind of
watch
for a long time.
Also
, I
vividly
remember, you are a fitness freak,
thus
, this
watch
will always be your companion while you workout. Needless to say, it
comes
with a countdown timer that can
help
you to monitor exercise with time.
Moreover
, the
watch
also
tracks
the distance while you go cycling. This will definitely
help
you
keep
a record of your
overall
distance covered till
now
.

I hope you will
make
the most out of this
watch
. Don't forget to share your feedback with me and say Hi to your brother and give my regards to your parents.

Best wishes,

Kunal
Chavda
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IELTS letter You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, tell him/her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend

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  American English
6 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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