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You had an appointment to meet someone but could not write a letter to request another meeting

You had an appointment to meet someone but could not write a letter to request another meeting r20o
dear sir or madamI am writing this letter to let you know that I unfortunately I was unable to honour our appointment however the reason I could not attend our meeting was my unexpected accident. Since it happened also suddenly I had no way to inform you. Let me explain my situation on the day of our meeting which was 10th of March I left my house in a hurry since I was running late. Just as I reached a cross road near by my house somebody sideswipe me. I could not remember much of it except folks steering me to the hospital lobby. Ever since I have woken up I have been trying to get in touch with you through various ways I called you messaged you even sent in email to you however since you did not respond I am writing this letter to you with the hope that you revert. Would you kindly reschedule appointment. Sure you will not be disappointed. As of now I am perfectly capable to travel I will meet you at a time and place of your choosing. Thank you for your considerationYours Faithfully
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dear
sir or
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madamI
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing this letter to
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let
you know that I unfortunately I was unable to
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honour
our appointment
however
the reason I could not attend our meeting was my unexpected accident.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
it happened
also
suddenly
I had no way to inform you.
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Let
me
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explain
my situation on the day of our meeting which was 10th of March I
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left
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
in a hurry since I was running late.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
as I reached a cross road
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
my
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house
somebody
The pronoun 'somebody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "sideswipes", "sideswiped".
sideswipe
me. I could not remember much of it except folks steering me to the hospital lobby. Ever since I have woken up I have been trying to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in touch with you through various ways I called you messaged you even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
in email to you
however
since you did not respond I am writing this letter to you with the hope that you revert. Would you kindly reschedule appointment. Sure you will not
be disappointed
. As of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I am
perfectly
capable to travel I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you at a time and place of your choosing. Thank you for your
Possible spelling mistake found.
considerationYours
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Faithfully

IELTS letter You had an appointment to meet someone but could not write a letter to request another meeting

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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