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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . , x1rQ
Dear Mr. John, I am Navjot and I am Writing this letter as in the coming month I am coming to the UK for a training programme. I am really excited for this as you are going to be our leader. Besides this, I came to know that you are looking for the social events organiser from our team. I am eager for this position in the fact of it will enhance my skills and knowledge along with this it will be my pleasure to work with you as a organiser. I would really appreciate if you can give me some details about this role such as what will be my resposibilities, rights? Is it going to be inside or outside event and what will be the venue for this. Furthermore, I have experience as a party organiser and wedding organiser consequently, it will be easy for me too organise this event and learn the resopsibilties. I will try my best at this position. I look forward to hearing your positive reply. Your sincerely, Ruby
Dear Mr. John,

I am
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Navjot and
I am Writing this letter as in the coming month I am coming to the UK for a training
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programme
. I am
really
excited for this as you are going to be our leader.

Besides
this, I came to know that you are looking for the social
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events
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organiser
from our team. I am eager for this position in the fact of it will enhance my
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skills
and knowledge along with this it will be my pleasure to work with you as
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a
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organiser
.

I would
really
appreciate if you can give me
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some
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details
about this role such as what will be my
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resposibilities
, rights? Is it going to be inside or outside
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event
and what will be the venue for this.

Furthermore
, I have experience as a party
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organiser
and wedding
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organiser
consequently
, it will be easy for me
Did you mean "to organise"?
too organise
this
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event
and learn the
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resopsibilties
. I will try my best at this position. I look forward to hearing your
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positive
reply.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

Ruby
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IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . ,

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.