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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. wodd
Respected Ashish, I have been looking for the new certification courses in Project Management and I have found that PMP certification is better than Prince 2 Certification for Project Management certification for Information Technology Industry. In the present scenario IT industry has published the data there was a loss of 500 billions dollars in all projects and only 20 percentage of Projects have actually meet the requirements of client as per their desire scope. In this certification they are focusing on 13 different knowledge areas like Scope, Schedule, Risk, Human Resource management etc. , after taking classes for 8 days it would provide me better understanding how to manage the projects in Company. Once I took the initial training from Institute then I would be giving exam in pro metric test center, by completing the certificate this would add a benefit for our team to perform better and we would be able to gather more efficiently the Business requirements from the clients and accordingly we would be hiring the team as per required skills set, so when ever client would evaluate the project success factors, our team would meet all the parameters in completing the project and sign-off document will be signed on time. So please grant me leave from 10 February to 18 February for taking the classes. Your's Faithfully Anuj Mehta
Respected Ashish, I have been looking for the new
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certification
courses in
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Project
Management and I have found that PMP
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certification
is better than Prince 2
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Certification
for
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Project
Management
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certification
for Information Technology Industry. In the present scenario IT industry has published the data there was a loss of 500 billions dollars in all
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projects
and
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only
20 percentage of
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Projects
have actually
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meet
the requirements of client as per their desire scope. In this
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certification
they are focusing on 13
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different
knowledge areas like Scope, Schedule,
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Risk
, Human Resource management etc.
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,
after taking classes for 8 days it would provide me better understanding how to manage the
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projects
in
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Company
. Once I took the initial training from Institute then I would be giving exam in pro metric
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test
center, by completing the certificate this would
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add
a benefit for our team to perform
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better and
we would be able to gather more
efficiently
the Business requirements from the clients and
accordingly
we would be hiring the team as per required
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skills
set,
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so
when
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ever
client would evaluate the
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project
success factors, our team would
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meet
all the parameters in completing the
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project
and
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sign
-off document will
be signed
on time.
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So
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please
grant me
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leave
from 10 February to 18 February for taking the classes.

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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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5.5
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