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you have recently noticed an increase in traffic in your residental area.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to request to you for traffic problem in my area where I live. My name is Jignesh Patel, My address is 2323 rue modugno, Montreal. I can see many traffic issues happens in my residential area. There is one road behind my home and many traffic problem created there. some reason behind it. first one is there are only single way instead of double and another problem is there is no any traffic signal and traffic police. Moreover Many people don't follow rules and regulation of traffic. If you don't mind, I have some solution if you want. To begin with, you should fix traffic signal and officer. Additionally, you explore some awareness to all people and make sure, anybody break rules then pay find for it. You make more space of road. Yours Faithfully, Jignesh
Dear Sir, I am writing to request to you for
traffic
problem in my area where I
live
. My name is
Jignesh
Patel, My address is 2323 rue
modugno
, Montreal. I can
see
many
traffic
issues happens in my residential area. There is one road behind my home and
many
traffic
problem created there.
some
reason behind it.
first
one is there are
only
single way
instead
of double and another problem is there is
no
any
traffic
signal and
traffic
police.
Moreover
Many
people
don't follow
rules
and regulation of traffic.

If you don't mind, I have
some
solution if you want. To
begin
with, you should
fix
traffic
signal and officer.
Additionally
, you explore
some
awareness to all
people
and
make
sure, anybody
break
rules
then pay find for it. You
make
more space of road. Yours
Faithfully
,
Jignesh
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