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write a letter to your friends to tell them about it and them for an evening meal

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Dear Prem, I hope you and your family are well. I am happy to hear you are goint to go for marrige. I inform to you, I got new field job as Network service enginner at Toronto. I will start this job next monday 26th April. My main duties looking for Local area network therefore I am very happy. I want to invite you for meal on tomrrow evening. I also invite Deep for join us for meal. I want to tell you something i moved to another address, My address is 200 park street, toronto. It is 2 hours away fron your resident. I will make new dishes for you and coldrinks like presotea which you like most. Please bring your family with you. Best regards, Jignesh Patel
Dear
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Prem
,

I hope you and your family are well. I am happy to hear you are
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goint
to go for
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marrige
.

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I
inform to you, I
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got
new field job as Network service
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enginner
at Toronto.
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I
will
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start
this job
next
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monday
26th April. My main duties looking for Local area network
therefore
I am
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very
happy. I want to invite you for meal on
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tomrrow
evening. I
also
invite Deep for
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join
us for meal.

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I
want to
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tell
you something
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i
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moved
to another address, My address is 200 park street,
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toronto
. It is 2 hours away
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fron
your resident. I will
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make
new dishes for you and
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coldrinks
like
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presotea
which you like most.
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Please
bring your family with you.

Best regards,

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Jignesh
Patel

IELTS letter write a letter to your friends to tell them about it and them for an evening meal

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
128 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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