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You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, apologize for damaging the product explain what happened say how are you going to fix the issue

You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, apologize for damaging the product explain what happened say how are you going to fix the issue gp9D
Dear Mayank, I hope you are well. I am extremely thankful to you for offering / for lending me your favourite badminton racket for my match yesterday as you were aware that I had lost my racket at the university campus. However, I would like to apologise for damaging it while playing. I know how much you value this racket and hearing this will be immensely painful for you. While playing, I was feeling so comfortable with your racket, and was enjoying every one of my shots. During the intense match I missed a shot and the racket hit the ground and due to that one of its strings broke. I know a few shops in my neighbourhood which specialise in mending sports gear. I will take this racket to one such shop and they should fix it in a day’s time. Again, I am sorry for delaying to tell you and I hope you can forgive me. Best Regards Reshmi
Dear
Mayank
,

I hope you are well. I am
extremely
thankful to you for offering / for lending me your
favourite
badminton racket for my match yesterday as you were aware that I had lost my racket at the university campus.

However
, I would like to
apologise
for damaging it while playing. I know how much you value this racket and hearing this will be
immensely
painful for you. While playing, I was feeling
so
comfortable with your racket, and was enjoying every one of my shots. During the intense match I missed a shot and the racket hit the ground and due to that one of its strings broke.

I know a few shops in my
neighbourhood
which
specialise
in mending sports gear. I will take this racket to one such
shop and
they should
fix
it in a day’s time.

Again, I am sorry for delaying to
tell
you and I hope you can forgive me.

Best Regards

Reshmi
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IELTS letter You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, apologize for damaging the product explain what happened say how are you going to fix the issue

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  American English
6 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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