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Dear Akıf, I want to say hello from my new house, I should move here immediately without inform you, because of my jobs. I got a promotion to chief of department which located in İstanbul, so I am here. Reasearching flats time is restiricted, so I focused only my important point not personal pleasure. My flat is very close to my company to avoid traffic, İstanbul city is notorious for traffic. İt is small minimalist home, it has american kitchen and sofa and table on livingroom, the toilet and bedroom that is all. I think there are enough to live with comfortable. Too much furnature make me tired and they distract me while working home, therefore minimalism is better way to me. It is tiny, however I have sofa at the living room for visitor, thus you can come to visit me an we can travel around the such a wonderfull city. see you.
Dear
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Akıf
,

I want to say hello from my new
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house
, I should
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move
here immediately without inform you,
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because
of my jobs. I
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got
a promotion to chief of department which located in
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İstanbul
, s
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I am here.

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flats time is
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restiricted
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I focused o
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my i
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point not personal pleasure. My flat is v
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close to my c
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to avoid traffic,
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İstanbul
city is notorious for traffic.
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İt
is sma
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nimalist home, it has
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american
kitchen and sofa and table on
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livingroom
, the toilet and bedroom tha
t is al
l. I thi
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ere are eno
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liv
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th comfortable. Too much
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furnature
mak
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e me
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tired and
they distract me while working home, the
refore mi
nimalism is
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better
way to me. It is tiny, how
ever I
have sofa
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at the living
room for visitor, thu
s yo
u can com
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e to
visit me
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an we
can travel around the such a
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wonderfull
city.
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see
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yo
u.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friends

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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