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You have recently moved to a new house there has been damaged after you have moved into the house. write a letter to your landlord explaining what have happened and ask him what you can do.

You have recently moved to a new house there has been damaged after you have moved into the house. write a letter to your landlord explaining what have happened and ask him what you can do. gYPDO

Dear Sir/Madam I'm writing this letter in order to inform you about the problems that your house has. when I hired your house last month at first your house seem more than satisfactory and I was really marveled. but, after two week that I moved in the house, problems start one after another. At first, I want to point out about the house electric problems. The electric fuse button doesn't work properly. beside, the some of sitting room lights did not work as well, and by replacing them with new ones the condition did not change. hence, I think there is a problem in house wiring. The second problem is kitchen faucet. although it work properly but it did not fasten strongly and it's wobbled frequently. The third problem is your house's ceiling which with every light raining, it start to leak. furthermore this matter has been caused that our kitchen Furniture are destroyed. I would appreciate if you could propose me a solution for these disaster condition. I desperately, look forward to getting your urgent reply about these matters. your sincerely

Dear Sir/Madam

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house
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start
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, I want to point out about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
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problems
. The electric fuse button doesn't work properly
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beside
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some of sitting
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change
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think
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problem
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 wiring.

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problem
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although
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work
properly
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but
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 and it's wobbled frequently
.

The third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 is your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
's ceiling which with every light raining, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
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furthermore
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 that our kitchen Furniture are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
.

I would appreciate if you could propose me a solution for Did you mean "this disaster" or "these disasters"?this disasterthese disasters
these disaster
 condition. I desperately
, look forward to getting your urgent reply about these matters.

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your
sincerely