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You have recently moved to a new house there has been damaged after you have moved into the house. write a letter to your landlord explaining what have happened and ask him what you can do.

You have recently moved to a new house there has been damaged after you have moved into the house. write a letter to your landlord explaining what have happened and ask him what you can do. gYPDO
Dear Sir/Madam I'm writing this letter in order to inform you about the problems that your house has. when I hired your house last month at first your house seem more than satisfactory and I was really marveled. but, after two week that I moved in the house, problems start one after another. At first, I want to point out about the house electric problems. The electric fuse button doesn't work properly. beside, the some of sitting room lights did not work as well, and by replacing them with new ones the condition did not change. hence, I think there is a problem in house wiring. The second problem is kitchen faucet. although it work properly but it did not fasten strongly and it's wobbled frequently. The third problem is your house's ceiling which with every light raining, it start to leak. furthermore this matter has been caused that our kitchen Furniture are destroyed. I would appreciate if you could propose me a solution for these disaster condition. I desperately, look forward to getting your urgent reply about these matters. your sincerely
Dear Sir/Madam

I'm writing this letter in order to inform you about the
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problems
that your
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house
has.
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when
I hired your
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house
last month at
first
your
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house
seem more than
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satisfactory and
I was
really
marveled.
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but
, after two
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week
that I
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moved
in the
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house
,
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problems
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start
one after another.

At
first
, I want to point out about the
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house
electric
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problems
. The electric fuse button doesn't work
properly
.
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beside
, the
Consider using "some sitting" or "some of the sitting".
some of sitting
room lights did not work
as well
, and by replacing them with new ones the condition did not
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change
.
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hence
, I
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think
there is a
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problem
in
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house
wiring.

The second
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problem
is kitchen faucet.
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although
it
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work
properly
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but
it did not fasten
strongly
and it's wobbled
frequently
.

The third
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problem
is your
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house
's ceiling which with every light raining, it
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start
to leak.
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furthermore
this matter has
been caused
that our kitchen Furniture are
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destroyed
.

I would appreciate if you could propose me a solution for
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these disaster
condition. I
desperately
, look forward to getting your urgent reply about these matters.

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your
sincerely

IELTS letter You have recently moved to a new house there has been damaged after you have moved into the house. write a letter to your landlord explaining what have happened and ask him what you can do.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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