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Recently you had a party at your house. There was a lot of noise late at night and you disturbed your next door neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour.

Recently you had a party at your house. There was a lot of noise late at night and you disturbed your next door neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. 3AXLl
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, I am writing to sincerely apologise for the disturbance caused during my birthday party last Saturday night. I was celebrating my 25th birthday with my friends and approximately two hours after the party started, two people, who were friends of a friend, started arguing about an issue that is still unknown to me. Initially it was just a discussion, but then it became a fight and I was forced to call the police. I deeply regret having interrupted your sleep. Please accept my most sincere apologies. The situation got out of control and noise at that point was inevitable. However, I understand that we all enjoy living in a peaceful neighbourhood and whatever happened at my party should not have disturbed you. I will refrain from holding parties in my unit in the future in order to avoid further problematic events in our residential area. Once again, my apologies for the inconvenience caused. Kind regards, Mike Wattie
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,

I am writing to
sincerely
apologise
for the disturbance caused during my birthday
party
last Saturday night.

I was celebrating my 25th birthday with my friends and approximately two hours after the
party
started
, two
people
, who were friends of a friend,
started
arguing about an issue
that is
still
unknown to me.
Initially
it was
just
a discussion,
but
then it became a
fight and
I
was forced
to call the police.

I
deeply
regret having interrupted your sleep.
Please
accept my most sincere apologies. The situation
got
out of control and noise at that point was inevitable.
However
, I understand that we all enjoy living in a peaceful
neighbourhood
and whatever happened at my
party
should not have disturbed you.

I will refrain from holding
parties
in my unit in the future in order to avoid
further
problematic
events
in our residential area.

Once again, my apologies for the inconvenience caused.

Kind regards, Mike
Wattie
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IELTS letter Recently you had a party at your house. There was a lot of noise late at night and you disturbed your next door neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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