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Hi my name is wina from Surabaya

Hi my name is wina from Surabaya eeBkB
Hi! My name is Wina from Surabaya. I've been attended online IELTS preparation course at the IALF. I feel so grateful that I chose IALF at the first place because the online course was joyful yet full of knowledge. I love how the instructors deliver the lessons as well as how the modules was set on an online platform calles canva, so that I can open, read, and exercise as much as I want even after the class finished. Moreover, I knew some friends through the online courses, they are very kind. I keep contact to some of them and we are helping and motivating each other to gain the best score on IELTS test. At least 3 of us, including me (because I only contacted these three people) have succeed in the test. Keep inspiring, IALF! Many thanks!
Hi! My name is
Wina
from Surabaya. I've
been attended
online
IELTS preparation course at the
IALF
. I feel
so
grateful that I chose
IALF
at the
first
place
because
the
online
course was joyful
yet
full of knowledge.
I
love
how the instructors deliver the lessons
as well
as how the modules
was set
on an
online
platform
calles
canva
,
so
that I can open, read, and exercise as much as I want even after the
class
finished.
Moreover
, I knew
some
friends through the
online
courses, they are
very
kind. I
keep
contact to
some
of
them and
we are helping and motivating each other to gain the best score on IELTS
test
. At least 3 of us, including me (
because
I
only
contacted these three
people
) have
succeed
in the
test
.
Keep
inspiring,
IALF
!
Many
thanks!
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IELTS letter Hi my name is wina from Surabaya

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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