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Hi my name is wina from Surabaya

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Hi! My name is Wina from Surabaya. I've been attended online IELTS preparation course at the IALF. I feel so grateful that I chose IALF at the first place because the online course was joyful yet full of knowledge. I love how the instructors deliver the lessons as well as how the modules was set on an online platform calles canva, so that I can open, read, and exercise as much as I want even after the class finished. Moreover, I knew some friends through the online courses, they are very kind. I keep contact to some of them and we are helping and motivating each other to gain the best score on IELTS test. At least 3 of us, including me (because I only contacted these three people) have succeed in the test. Keep inspiring, IALF! Many thanks!
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IELTS preparation course at the
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. I feel
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grateful that I chose
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course was joyful
yet
full of knowledge.
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I
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love
how the instructors deliver the lessons
as well
as how the modules
was set
on an
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online
platform
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calles
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canva
,
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that I can open, read, and exercise as much as I want even after the
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class
finished.
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, I knew
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friends through the
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courses, they are
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very
kind. I
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keep
contact to
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them and
we are helping and motivating each other to gain the best score on IELTS
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test
. At least 3 of us, including me (
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I
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!
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thanks!

IELTS letter Hi my name is wina from Surabaya

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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