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You have recently moved to a different house. Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

You have recently moved to a different house. Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit g8o2L
Dear Celinethis is Sara, I hope you and your family are safe and healthy. I'm writing this letter to let you know that I recently have bought a new place for living. as you know, unfortunately, the exhouse had a lot of problems for living. For example, I didn't have good neighbors, in fact, they were extand family with a lot of noise and also the apartment was not large for us. let me tell you about the new flat, it is about 80 meters it has 2 bedrooms with a large kitchen and living room with wonderful views. I would like to say, I have a party for next week on the weekend about 15 o'clock with 50 guests. I will appreciate if you come to this party and see and tell me your opinion about the new house for buying carpet, in fact, your consultant will be effective. I will send you the new address and phone number. Hope to see you soon. with love Celine
Dear
Celinethis
is Sara, I hope you and your family are safe and healthy. I'm writing this letter to
let
you know that I recently have
bought
a
new
place for living.
as
you know, unfortunately, the
exhouse
had
a lot of
problems for living.
For example
, I didn't have
good
neighbors, in fact, they were
extand
family with
a lot of
noise and
also
the apartment was not large for us.
let
me
tell
you about the
new
flat, it is about 80 meters it has 2 bedrooms with a large kitchen and living room with wonderful views. I would like to say, I have a party for
next
week on the weekend about 15 o'clock with 50 guests. I will appreciate if you
come
to this party and
see
and
tell
me your opinion about the
new
house
for buying carpet, in fact, your consultant will be effective.
I
will
send
you the
new
address and phone number. Hope to
see
you
soon
.
with
love
Celine
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different house. Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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