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Invite friend, describe the occasion, importance and other plans

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Hi Vedica, Hope this email finds you well and healthy. I want to invite you to visit our home town for 9 - day festival next month. Our upcoming festival, widely known as Ganesh Chaturthi, is an occasion to worship Elephant God for their blessings. It will be my pleasure to have you spend time with us. This is one of the festive where you would see a competition for largest idol and most decorated. Every neighbourhood will be decorated with different themes each day; fun activities and cultural are a part of celebration. The most auspicious day is the last day, when all idols will be immersed in ocean and a huge gathering will be seen at beach. Other than these, I have made a bucket list of places for us to visit such as we will fly to Ooty, a hill station and Kerela – famously known as God’s own place. I really look forward to your visit and it’s time to re-kindle our childhood memories. Take care and write back soon Suji

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