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application for weekend job as a local tour guide

application for weekend job as a local tour guide dD2pE

Dear peter I have seen your advertisement for weekend job as a local tour guide on linkedin. I’m student in English and looking for a job position on weekends. I am interested in presentation and sharing my knowledge. I’m also an English presenter in our college, on the other hand I know all around the KD town very well. I have been in jungles and mountains since for many days. So, I can show stunning nature of KD to visitor and explain about the history and culture. I think I can be fit with this position which you have announced. I have not experience in tour guide but I can join earlier to learn the details. I’m free on the weekend and looking forward to hearing from you. This is great opportunity for me to practice more for presentation and new experience in new situation.

Dear peter

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