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Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road in front of your house. You should - Introduce yourself - Explain the condition of the road - And suggest what they should do

Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road in front of your house. You should - Introduce yourself - Explain the condition of the road - And suggest what they should do DaQB6
Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding a road near to my home on Northbrook Street where there are lots of potholes, which are creating problems for inhabitants. I, Ryan Walker, am a resident of Harlow Town, who is residing here over 10 years. Harlow Town is located in the central part of Essex County, which is well-known for entertainment purpose in all over the UK. The situation of the road is unacceptable as our car-repair costs are growing every year due to this road, and during the rainy season, the number of accidents grows significantly. As a result, we are used to the presence of emergency services in our area. Therefore, I accept you to repair this road before the rainy season; otherwise, residents are planning for a protest next week in front of the authorities. Consequently, prioritising this work could help you to save your face from this embarrassing situation, in my view. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Walker
Dear Sir,

I am writing to you regarding a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
near to my home on Northbrook Street where there are lots of potholes, which are creating problems for inhabitants.

I, Ryan Walker, am a resident of Harlow Town, who is residing here over 10 years. Harlow Town
is located
in the central part of Essex County, which is well-known for entertainment purpose in all over the UK.

The situation of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
is unacceptable as our car-repair costs are growing every year due to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
, and during the rainy season, the number of accidents grows
significantly
.
As a result
, we are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to the presence of emergency services in our area.

Therefore
, I accept you to repair this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the rainy season;
otherwise
, residents are planning for a protest
next
week in front of the authorities.
Consequently
,
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prioritising
this work could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you to save your face from this embarrassing situation, in my view.

I am awaiting your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ryan Walker
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road in front of your house. You should - Introduce yourself - Explain the condition of the road - And suggest what they should do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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