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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter: -Give details of your course -Explain why you need a week off -Say what you want the principal to do

You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter: -Give details of your course -Explain why you need a week off -Say what you want the principal to do xe0N
Dear Principal, My name is Estefania and I am doing a master degree at the National University. The MBA is called ‘Feminism and gender trough history’ and we have lessons three times a week. I am writing in the hope that you can help me with a situation I am having. As you probably know, many of the students here in Rosario were not born and raised here, and that’s my case. My family lives 200km. away and my father is going trough a rough time because of an illness. In three weeks he’s having an important surgery and I want to be there with him, but I am not allowed to skip one week at the course. I need a letter from you authorizing me to take a week off to visit my father. I hope you understand that I would never ask for something like this if it wasn’t so urgent. Thank you very much for your attention. Yours faithfully, Estefania
Dear Principal,

My name is
Estefania and
I am doing a master degree at the National University. The MBA
is called
‘Feminism and gender trough history’ and we have lessons three times a week.

I am writing in the hope that you can
help
me with a situation I am having. As you
probably
know,
many
of the students here in Rosario were not born and raised here, and that’s my case. My family
lives
200km
.
away
and my father is going trough a rough time
because
of an illness. In three weeks he’s having an
important
surgery and I want to be there with him,
but
I am not
allowed
to skip one week at the course.

I need a letter from you authorizing me to take a week off to visit my father. I hope you understand that I would never
ask for
something like this if it wasn’t
so
urgent. Thank you
very
much for your attention.

Yours
faithfully
,

Estefania
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IELTS letter You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter: -Give details of your course -Explain why you need a week off -Say what you want the principal to do

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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