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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. WAqb

Dear David, Hope this letter finds you in pristine health. I am Victor, the person who met with an accident on Ribbons Street last Thursday. I received your name and address from Central Hospital, where you got me admitted to. I write to you to express my gratitude to you for being the god sent samaritan and saving my life on that fateful day. I am so thankful to you and to god for sending you at the right moment to the accident site. I was told by the hospital staff that I would not have lived, had it not been for the first-aid that you provided while I was being taken to the hospital. Me and my family are overwhelmed with gratitude for what you did for us. It would be a huge honour for us, to have you and your family come over for a dinner, on the day of your choice in the coming week. That is the least I could do to thank you for the gift of life that you've offered me. Eager to hear from you. Your new friend, Victor

Dear David,

Hope this letter finds you in pristine health.

I am Victor, the person who met with an accident on Ribbons Street last Thursday. I received your name and address from Central Hospital, where you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 me admitted to. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 write to you to express my gratitude to you for being the god This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
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samaritan
 and saving my life on that fateful day.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 thankful to you and to god for sending you at the right moment to the accident site. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 by the hospital staff that I would not have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
, had it not been for the first
-aid that you provided while I was being taken
 to the hospital. When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my family are overwhelmed
 with gratitude for what you did for us.

It would be a huge Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.honor
honour
 for us, to have you and your family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over for a dinner, on the day of your choice in the coming week. That is
 the least I could do to thank you for the gift of life that you've offered me.

Eager to hear from you.

Your new friend,

Victor