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You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you decided to move to a different city Describe the new city and accommodation Ask your friend to arrange a visit.

You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you decided to move to a different city Describe the new city and accommodation Ask your friend to arrange a visit. lJ1J
Dear Tom, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and good spirit. Last month I shifted to New York. My company transferred me there in the light of the fact it’s a nice place for career growth and has immense opportunities, On the other hand I love exploring new places consequently The Big apple is appropriate for my new quest. To my surprise while going to work everyday is a new experience, Different people various culture hence make me emotionally satisfied, On the one hand sky line and On the other hand immensely beautiful Central Park Eventually makes this place unique. I have a single bedroom apartment nearby my working place. It faces directly towards the Central Park consequently views get me relaxed after long day, Just having a tea in the balcony and looking at lush greenery is extremely mesmerizing. All in all a very fulfilling experience daily. Last summer I visited you now it’s your turn. We can together explore the City more-over I can accommodate you. Let’s relive the nostalgic memories of our college time. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly
Dear Tom, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and
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York. My
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company
transferred me there in the light of the fact it’s a nice
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place
for career growth and has immense opportunities,
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I
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love
exploring
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new
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places
consequently
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Big
apple is appropriate for my
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new
quest.

To my surprise while going to work
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everyday
is a
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new
experience,
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Different
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people
various culture
hence
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make
me
emotionally
satisfied, On the one hand sky line and
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immensely
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beautiful
Central Park
Eventually
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makes
this
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place
unique. I have a single bedroom apartment nearby my working
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place
. It faces
directly
towards the Central Park
consequently
views
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get
me relaxed after long day,
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Just
having a tea in the balcony and looking at lush greenery is
extremely
mesmerizing. All in all a
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very
fulfilling experience daily.

Last summer I visited you
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now
it’s your turn. We can together explore the City more-over I can accommodate you.
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Let
’s relive the nostalgic memories of our college time. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
lovingly
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you decided to move to a different city Describe the new city and accommodation Ask your friend to arrange a visit.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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